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John M. Price's avatar

Hi - I was on road trip today and because of your post about readers, I listened to all six episodes of this. I have always been interested in time travel. I have two observations for what - if anything - they might be worth. (Who am I? ) I was waiting for and hoping for a bit more temporal disphoria between the two characters. 200 years is huge to not have stumbled a bit more thru their interactions. My other observation is just a technical suggestion. I liked the rapid dialog, but I found that the constant “close quote'“ portions of the audio version prohibited me from really stepping into and experiencing the dialog. I could follow the dialog just fine and the occasional identifier tags served their purpose. For those who might be audio listeners I would suggest eliminating the quotation marks and simply using italics for the dialogue. I'm new at this, so if I'm wrong about how italics are handled on audio I apologize in advance. If I'm full of it, just delete this post. 😀

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Stephen B. Anthony's avatar

I agree that there could have been more on the 200-year differences and would have leaned into that a lot more in a longer story. I get it.

Interesting thought about the quotes. I haven't listened to the audio versions of these, so I may play around with that.

Really appreciate you going through them.

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