This is a good story so far - about the read the last installment as well.
Great twists, relatable characters; it has everything to engage the readers.
If I may - I see the main character, the "hero" here as Moses. Personally, I would have preferred if he got out of the bad situation by acting (even if it's after a moment of self-pity) rather than because Alyse came to him.
The moral dilemma with Kane is also really interesting and I'm looking forward to learn how this ends.
I didn't quite execute cleanly. My goal was to try my hand at a false protagonist. It's not really Moses' story. He's just the chronicler. Appreciate the feedback!
This is a good story so far - about the read the last installment as well.
Great twists, relatable characters; it has everything to engage the readers.
If I may - I see the main character, the "hero" here as Moses. Personally, I would have preferred if he got out of the bad situation by acting (even if it's after a moment of self-pity) rather than because Alyse came to him.
The moral dilemma with Kane is also really interesting and I'm looking forward to learn how this ends.
I didn't quite execute cleanly. My goal was to try my hand at a false protagonist. It's not really Moses' story. He's just the chronicler. Appreciate the feedback!
Just binged this, patiently waiting for the last instalment! Fascinating world you’ve built.
Scheduled for today. Maybe I'll just post it now.
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Poor, sweet Kane. I’m so curious to see how it ends!