This is a fantastic opening. The childhood scene with the ring pulled me in immediately, and then the shift into Esme s home life added so much depth to the world. The detail about sweeping the floor as dignity was such a powerful bit of characterization. Iām very curious about the ring and the Wentworth name now.
Iām riveted already. Your descriptions of young love are so spot on. Canāt wait to read more.
really opens the story, and strokes your curiosity
Iām so curious! I especially loved the line āYou did not become the floor.ā
This is a fantastic opening. The childhood scene with the ring pulled me in immediately, and then the shift into Esme s home life added so much depth to the world. The detail about sweeping the floor as dignity was such a powerful bit of characterization. Iām very curious about the ring and the Wentworth name now.